Screams Of Silence by Tim Chambers
Begone ye screams of silence, harbingers of pain
Cloaked in isolation, you mock in harsh disdain
My soul is torn asunder, I curse you, God of Hell
As you pierced my tortured soul, what horrors I befell.
You spoke of quiet solitude, to tempt me to your lair
Then lanced me in my troubled heart, to depths of dark despair
Nemesis, I beg of thee, rise up in righteous ire
Protect me from Tisiphone, from Hell's eternal fire
With all my voice I scream to you, protect me from the night
Alas, in forlorn desperation, I journey to the light
Banished to mind's Coventry, I heed the demon's call
Beckoned by the silent screams, I enter Dante's hall.
Cloaked in isolation, you mock in harsh disdain
My soul is torn asunder, I curse you, God of Hell
As you pierced my tortured soul, what horrors I befell.
You spoke of quiet solitude, to tempt me to your lair
Then lanced me in my troubled heart, to depths of dark despair
Nemesis, I beg of thee, rise up in righteous ire
Protect me from Tisiphone, from Hell's eternal fire
With all my voice I scream to you, protect me from the night
Alas, in forlorn desperation, I journey to the light
Banished to mind's Coventry, I heed the demon's call
Beckoned by the silent screams, I enter Dante's hall.
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Rating: B |
I sometimes write about my life's experiences. Sometimes I write to attempt to experience the lives of others. Screams is an attempt to journey into thoughts of depression and isolation.
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this peom made me cry i fell your pain - kyle |
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hi, i love this poem. i can relate it to myself. it's great! - Donna |
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that was great 10/10 - michael |
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this is a very good poem an i can really relate. - jessica |
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yeah. this poem would e good for someone who reads the bibble every day, like me. i can actually understand what this person is trying to say. i don't know if you can. but i can, and it touches me. i like this poem as many others do i like also. - omee |
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After reading this poem,I feel atleast someone can connect with me! - Kimberly |
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this was the greatest poem ever written. keep up the good work - Kyle |
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wow, while it's written in old style it is captivating and really cleverlly written. what an awesome poem! - laura |
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it was so dark, i felt drawn into it somehow. i love it! - Cassandra |
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i love this poem. it is very good with words like harbinger(forteller) it adds more mystery i guess you would call it but I LOVE THIS POEM. - andi |
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I would give this a 9 out of a scale of 1-10. This was a very good poem that just brings out an imagination and new sense about things. - Megan |
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This poem was truly beautiful. I love how you use more sophisticated language. Most of the writers this day butcher modern day English in their poetry, yet you just made it sound simply elegant. - Kaitlin |
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Brillaint. Genius. This is perfection in form of poetry and true expession of emotion in the original art of darkness and reality. brilliant. I cannot say anymore. - Dena |
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This poem is beautiful. The way the author used the words to create a burning image in the mind that penetrates the soul. - Rickie |
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I like the way u express yourself, def not somethign u see everyday. Your knowledge has certainly contributed to the writing of your poem. When I see your style of writing compared to others I it's unique and it resembles more of , what I call the "older" styles of poems. Keep on writing and learning. Great job. - Isidora |
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This was an amazing poem! It touched me deep down. Keep up the good work. one of the best I've read! - Jenna |
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I like this poem it tells alot and it has helped me. - Sarah |
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WOW. this poem is so deep. i think it has such meaning i love it. well done on great writing - Kirsten |
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Hey your poem was amazing i write poems too. your obviously a talented writer with an amazing mind i appreciate what you say. ive felt like that too. anyway i wanted to tell you i loved it. email me with more if you want to? - Lauren |
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ey gud poem. im sry u feel dis way i hope u make it threw - ilona |
