If Love Is Red, Then We Are Colorblind by Allenda
All I can seem to think of,
Are those times when you made my heart dance.
It danced with yours in perfect rhythm,
When they were close enough.
All I can seem to think of,
Is the way your eyes stared into mine.
You could make me lose my knees,
When you were close enough.
All I can seem to think of,
Are the words you always whispered into my ear.
You could send chills down my spine,
When you whispered close enough.
All I can seem to think of,
Is your thumb that slowly touched my hand.
That comfort could bring tears to my eyes,
When you did it close enough.
All I can seem to think of,
Are those times you'd kiss me for being me.
You'd put that incredible feeling in my stomach,
And you were always close enough.
All I can seem to think of,
Is the time your heart stopped dancing, your
eyes looked away, you lost your voice,
your hand wasn't there anymore, your
lips weren't near mine, and when love turned
red, and we became colorblind.
You're making me miss you...
I guess we weren't close enough.
Are those times when you made my heart dance.
It danced with yours in perfect rhythm,
When they were close enough.
All I can seem to think of,
Is the way your eyes stared into mine.
You could make me lose my knees,
When you were close enough.
All I can seem to think of,
Are the words you always whispered into my ear.
You could send chills down my spine,
When you whispered close enough.
All I can seem to think of,
Is your thumb that slowly touched my hand.
That comfort could bring tears to my eyes,
When you did it close enough.
All I can seem to think of,
Are those times you'd kiss me for being me.
You'd put that incredible feeling in my stomach,
And you were always close enough.
All I can seem to think of,
Is the time your heart stopped dancing, your
eyes looked away, you lost your voice,
your hand wasn't there anymore, your
lips weren't near mine, and when love turned
red, and we became colorblind.
You're making me miss you...
I guess we weren't close enough.
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This poem is merely about the feelings behind the end of your first love relationship at age 16. It's about how the good times are all we seem to remember, and always seem to linger in our minds. Every last detail of movement or words clings to our memory.
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your poem is so amazing!it makes me feel so happy,and that i realize how love is so significant to all the readers or to all the people. so just kip up d gud work - karen |
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oh mi god, your poem is heavy, i never thought that that kind of love could be put into words. i know that feelin to well. your pure talented! well done girl. - Gem |
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keep it up! thats an awsome poem! - alex |
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i thought it was a poem about them memories you have when it all ends but sometimes's it those memories that cause u to hold on to them and makes it hard to move on "good" - Jannea |
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oh wow i just cant express how i feel right now. that was so amazing. it really touched my heart keep up the good work x x - Katie |
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Aww it brought a tear to my eye well yea almost but it was good! - Stephanie |
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this is a really beautiful poem i love it keep up the good work! :) - poo |
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i loved this poem. I love how in the beginning you fall in love with the guy the author is talking about and by the end you're like, "What a jerk". - Amy |
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this poem is another one that totally describes wut i am feeling about my ex. i know that while i was with him i was miserable, but all i seem to remember is all the good sweet stuff that he did with me. - alex |
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Oh my* It was a great poem*.. I really thought it was sweet!*..welp, that's all* - Lindsay |
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I LOVED THIS POEM! YOU HAVE A REAL TALENT! I KNOW EXACTLY WHAT YOUR GOIN THROUGH! I'VE BEEN THERE TOO! KEEP WRITING! - Drie |
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WOW! That was exilente. I loved It. Very beutiful. Keep writing because u r very good at ir! - cecily |
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OH MY GOD THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!!!! IT TOUCHED ME FOR REAL CUZ I HAVE BEEN IN THAT PLACE BEFORE AND ITS NOT A GOOD PLACE TO0 BE (ACTUALLY I'M STILL THERE BUT I'M GETTING OVER IT)(I HOPE) BIT FOR REAL YOU ALL THAT HAVE NOT BEEN IN LOVE OR IF YOU HAVE YOU NEED TO THINK ABOUT THIS POEM FOR REAL. GIRL YOU JUST GO KEEP WRITING THINGS JUST LIKE THIS - TABITHA |
