Let's Make A Deal by Diane Blue
You forgive me for liking you too much,
And I'll forgive you for not liking me enough.
You forgive me for missing you so,
And I'll forgive you for being so cold.
You forgive me for the loud racing of my heart,
And I'll forgive you for not hearing it.
You forgive me for playing your games,
And I'll forgive you for toying with my emotions.
You forgive me for finding you so attractive,
And I'll forgive you for not noticing.
You forgive me for raising you up so high,
And I'll forgive you for bringing me down so low.
You forgive me for wanting to be with you,
And I'll forgive you for avoiding me.
You forgive me for being so pathetic,
And I'll forgive you for taking advantage of it.
You forgive me for not being able to let go,
And I'll forgive you for never having latched on.
You forgive me for having hopes and dreams,
And I'll forgive you for crushing them.
Forgiveness brings inner peace.
Do we have a deal?
And I'll forgive you for not liking me enough.
You forgive me for missing you so,
And I'll forgive you for being so cold.
You forgive me for the loud racing of my heart,
And I'll forgive you for not hearing it.
You forgive me for playing your games,
And I'll forgive you for toying with my emotions.
You forgive me for finding you so attractive,
And I'll forgive you for not noticing.
You forgive me for raising you up so high,
And I'll forgive you for bringing me down so low.
You forgive me for wanting to be with you,
And I'll forgive you for avoiding me.
You forgive me for being so pathetic,
And I'll forgive you for taking advantage of it.
You forgive me for not being able to let go,
And I'll forgive you for never having latched on.
You forgive me for having hopes and dreams,
And I'll forgive you for crushing them.
Forgiveness brings inner peace.
Do we have a deal?
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People don't always feel the same way about us, as we feel about them. It's not a crime, only human nature. We all know this of course, but we also know the hurt that comes when the feelings aren't shared ones. I do believe that forgiveness does help bring peace.
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this poem has just brought tears to my eyes ive recently spilt with my husband and its exactly how i feel and how it was. - kerry |
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its a great poem, hits the spot! thats the problem! its to good! - leon |
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by the time i was finished with this poem i was dreched in tiers cuz u know how exactly how most of us lover feel but i still can't forgive him or make a deal like this to him my god help me forgive him soon . keep up the good work! - sanam |
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I loved this poem, because I feel I'm in that situation and state of mind right now - Lisa |
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this poem is grate it is soo deep and it talks a lot to me cauz im going throut that rite now. and letting go is the best thing we can do - chabelys |
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I love this poem and I was trying to tell my ex this exact thing today but couldn't find the words and I'll be darn they are all in a poem! Excellent job! I can't wait to read more of where that came from. - Jasmine |
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love it and i know how you feel? - k |
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This poem is so very real, it touches all the bases of most typical relationships. You should be a travel agent for Guilt Trips. - gypsy |
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great! really great! sO tOuching and the emOtiOn which the authOr is trying tO cOnvey is very transparent! lOve it! - veejay |
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That is an amazing poem. i am right there with you. - julie |
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I've been there. you captured my side of it perfectly. - L |
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This poem really touched my heart because it makes me think of some of the things that i have gone through when it comes to loving someone. I recently realized that people say what they do not feel sometimes. Learning that the hard way really sux. Well ur a great poet, keep up the good work and keep writing from ur heart. Sabra - Sabra |
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OH my gosh. This is amazing. Someone once told me the reason poetry is so great is because when you read something that is happening to you, you know someone else has gone through it, and they lived. This poem is just. . . amazing. - Kelsey |
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Great! - Pia |
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i really like the idea of ur poem wouldnt it b so easy to say lets just make a deal! - dan |
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I love this poem its really digs down into alot of peoples feeling that they dont know how to put into words this poem is brillent - Sara |
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great. just great. forgiveing is wath we need. not blameing them for not likeing us. - Dejan |
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this poem is just so good. it embodies almost exactly the way that i feel right now. good job Diane on making this p0em! you really set a great example for all teenagers like me! - Mc |
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thats nice 10/10 - T |
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The instint i finished reading this poem i thought about my friend dillon and i began to cry like ive never cried before and i thank you for that because now i can let go and FORGIVE him. - Lindsey |
