If by Tara Simms
If love is supposed to set you free
Why do I feel chained?
If love is full of sunshine,
Why do I see rain?
If love makes the world go round
Why am I standing still?
If love is a walk in the clouds
Why am I trudging uphill?
If love is about enjoying today
Why do I look to tomorrow?
If love is the greatest joy
Why do I feel sorrow?
Why do I feel chained?
If love is full of sunshine,
Why do I see rain?
If love makes the world go round
Why am I standing still?
If love is a walk in the clouds
Why am I trudging uphill?
If love is about enjoying today
Why do I look to tomorrow?
If love is the greatest joy
Why do I feel sorrow?
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I wrote this poem after I left my husband. It made me realize how truly unhappy I was in our marriage. For years, I knew things weren't as they should've been. But this was the first time I ever put it into words. I had a few doubts after we separated. Was this the right thing to do? Would I regret this someday? This poem made me realize how trapped I felt when I was with him and how free I felt without him.
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simple and so very beautiful. I wish I had the courage you had to leave him. - lady |
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EXACTLY! Thank you for putting these feelings into words. I cant tell you how much it touched me. - Natasha |
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This is an amazing poem. I'm only 15 but i absolutely love this poem! keep up the good work - Hannah |
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Great! Right on point. - Jackie |
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This poem had me from the very first line and that's a very rare thing. I loved it and can also relate to it. - Sherree |
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You can really make someone cry that was great 16 - JASMINE |
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I LOVE THIS POEM . I LOVE EVERY SINGLE THING ABOUT IT . AND THE BEST THING IS THAT IT MAKES PERFECT SENSE . KEEP WRITING. PEACE OUT GURL! - Kayla |
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Exactly! - Divya |
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THIS WAS GREAT! - Karmen |
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wow - Lynn |
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excellent poem! That is exactly how I am feeling right now, but my husband doesn't seem to understand! - Angie |
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This poem really defined love, the joys and sorrows make the wholesome of it. - Algernon |
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This poem really hits home to the way that i feel at this present moment.thanks for the reality check! - Joyce |
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TERRIFIC!!! - melissa |
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someone like me,with whom the same thing has happened,ca perhaps understand how great the poem is. - mohit |
