Blue Or Brown by Deborah Grijalva
There are two I love;
and they're so different from each other.
One is quiet;
the other just won't shut up!
One has soft brown eyes that are big as can be;
the other has blue eyes that are deep as the sea.
One I've loved for more than a year;
the other has just come into my life.
One knows how I feel;
the other is clueless of the love I have for him.
One I've known for three years;
the other I've just met.
One I'll see for years to come;
the other I may only see for one more month.
One has never once held me in his arms;
the other I never want him to let go.
One I think about once in a while;
the other is always on my mind.
One all my friends know;
the other a few know of.
One it's the same feelings day after day;
the other I've never had these feelings before.
They're both into sports;
but they're different.
They're both as sweet as can be;
but in different ways.
When I'm with one I feel so different;
when I'm with the other I never want to part.
They're so different;
yet the same.
Who's the better one?
Well, you tell me.
and they're so different from each other.
One is quiet;
the other just won't shut up!
One has soft brown eyes that are big as can be;
the other has blue eyes that are deep as the sea.
One I've loved for more than a year;
the other has just come into my life.
One knows how I feel;
the other is clueless of the love I have for him.
One I've known for three years;
the other I've just met.
One I'll see for years to come;
the other I may only see for one more month.
One has never once held me in his arms;
the other I never want him to let go.
One I think about once in a while;
the other is always on my mind.
One all my friends know;
the other a few know of.
One it's the same feelings day after day;
the other I've never had these feelings before.
They're both into sports;
but they're different.
They're both as sweet as can be;
but in different ways.
When I'm with one I feel so different;
when I'm with the other I never want to part.
They're so different;
yet the same.
Who's the better one?
Well, you tell me.
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This poem is about two guys that I like and can't stop thinking about, yet I don't know who I like better. They're the same in most ways but they are different; and that's why I'm not able to know which one I want.
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ilove it u show go with the other - tiff |
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I love this poem. I was in this situation before and i felt exactly the way u describe. I picked the one that made me feel something i never felt b4. the other guy might have been prince charming but the one that picked is the once in a lifetime love - Kasia |
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I loved this poem! It is the exact same way I feel. There's a blue eyed and a brown eyed guy in my life. It is just the perfect poem to me! - Crystal |
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sooooooooooooooooooooooo tru about my life one goes to school with me while the other is home-schooled - Baby girl |
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This poem was so true about how things are going for me rigt now! When I read it, I was in shock, just because of how true it was! I couldn't belive it! I have it saved on my computer, so I can go back and look at it whenever I want to;)! It's a great poem! - amanda |
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OMG YOU PUT ALL MY THOUGHTS AND FEELINGS INTO WORDS! I have the same problem with these 2 guyz you dont know how much you've helped to at least put my feelings into words! thank you soooo much - Nikole |
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im speechless! that same thing is happening to me as i sit here. that was awesum dude. keep it up - princess |
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this poem is really great! I am going through just about the same thing right now. Just do what you think is best and if you dont know be friends with both! - kayla |
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i love your poem! i know exactly how you feel! i have known this guy for 3 years and we have always been really close(he really does have brown eyes) and there is this guy i have known for a coupla months ( he has blue eyes) i love them both and dont know what to do! - krystin |
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hey girl! you're poems are so good! this one is my favorite! i have a guy who i love to death and he knows it and the other one doesn't know it as much. we kinda split i guess you can say. i called him a few days ago and i hope he returns my call! - simone |
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your poem portrays exactly what im going through. ITS AMAZING! the blue-eyed boy i will always love but the brown-eyed boy im IN love with. God Bless* - chick_1787 |
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Your poem is so awsome I really feel the same way. I just want to thank you for writing this poem and writing what you feel in this poem. Just know that your not the only one that feels this way. - Jennifer |
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Well I thought this poem was awesome because it made me think about my ex-boyfriend Matt. We had been together for over a year and then out of nowhere came this guy Tyler, he was so hott. and talk about blue eyes. but then things started to fall apart with Matt and I and then Tyler left too. So I feel ya! - Sarah |
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oh wow i felt that EXACT same way for two guys. one with brown eyes and one with deep blue! i went with the new out-going one with blue eyes, but i'm still best buds with the brown eyed one.. it was tough - Jamie |
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this poem tellz my whole life! all i gotta say is that this is one of the best poems ive ever red in my life! good job gurl! - Angie |
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Hey you have an awsome poem here. I have the same feelings I like two people and it is like the same feelings as in this poem. - Abby |
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I really liked your poem! I'm confused and don't know what to do also. - Julie |
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This poem really hits home in describing exactly how I feel about these two guys...do you believe in a soulmate?... I think that I have two... - Leanna |
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I love this poem and it totally desribes how I feel! - Ashley |
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Exelent poem. go with the one you never want to part with. - Angela |
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It is hard to choose, but that's life..just don't be too greedy, and you'll know who is the one u want - jane |
