Take Me To A Dream by Dreamgirl
Take me to a dream
That I never dreamed of,
To a place so beautiful
That we can stay for eternity,
A dream that seems to be
More real than real life
A dream of no problems or worries.
Take me to a dream
A place for just the two of us,
Where we can express our inner
most thoughts, feelings, and emotions,
To a beautiful land where nobody
Is there but just the two of us.
Take me to a dream
A dream where I can have fun,
Where I am not being fused or abused at
Controlled or being yelled at,
To a beautiful place that I can lay at
In peace where I can think at,
Where I will have no worries
and do nothing but dream.
Take me to a dream.....
That I never dreamed of,
To a place so beautiful
That we can stay for eternity,
A dream that seems to be
More real than real life
A dream of no problems or worries.
Take me to a dream
A place for just the two of us,
Where we can express our inner
most thoughts, feelings, and emotions,
To a beautiful land where nobody
Is there but just the two of us.
Take me to a dream
A dream where I can have fun,
Where I am not being fused or abused at
Controlled or being yelled at,
To a beautiful place that I can lay at
In peace where I can think at,
Where I will have no worries
and do nothing but dream.
Take me to a dream.....
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This poem represents my inner feelings of what a teenager goes through in today times.
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that poem was really good although im sure you heard that before but it reminds me of my friends life of being abused as a child but she grew up and fought her mom with words instead of violence. - jay |
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I love this poem. I feel the same way. I want to go to that dream place with him too. - Dee |
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wow, this poem takes my breath away. awesome - Joe |
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I LIKE TIS BECUASE ITS WHAT I FEEL PLEASE TAKE ME TO THAT DREAM PLACE TOO - AMANDA |
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i have never neva herd a poem like this before it really touched me and i think it came from the bottom of her heart. - Levie |
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I love that poem! It says all the things that I was trying to say, but I couldn't find the words to descibe it. Your a natural poet! I love it so much! - Shannon |
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i REALLY REALLY liked this poem. it what i feel but could never find the way to put it. - molly |
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This is a great poem. I couldn't have put it better. - Serena |
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I love it! It really tells what shes thinking - Ali |
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this poem is really touchable ato teenagers because of the pressure from parents and other outcomes in life so this could be a poem to release your stress..very good poem - xee |
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This poem really describes a teenagers dream! - Papi |
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The poem is very beautiful. It speaks of a place that can't be tainted by the anyone else''s opinons or thoughts but the dreams own. A place of no intruptions. - Micahel |
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This is a beautiful poem, and it explains my feelings for somebody perfectly. - Jessica |
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very touchable! is like "dreaming is living in your own world". - Pilar |
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I thought this poem was well written and from the heart. It touched me because it says how I feel. - K. |
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It is nice and romantic! Fantastic! - Serene |
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i loved your poem it was really good it made my cry and think of my boyfriend good job - nikki |
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I think she wrote a very good poem, it relates to a special place where two people can be together and away from the pressures of today. A place where you can just dream of anything you want to and with anybody. - Wanda |
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I think this is a wonderful poem that is simple yet it explains many feelings at the same time. I could totally relate to this poem where sometimes you just want to be somewhere else.. like a dreamland. I think your poem is beautiful! - Jaclyn |
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AMAZING~! - Mark |
