Evening's Answers by BSC
As the scarlet sunset slowly fades,
And dusk introduces the night,
The crescent moon on center stage,
Gives forth a semblance of light.
Perching on the mossy dock,
Staring out at the mirrored lake,
I reflect on this new battle,
Unsure of which road to take.
In this dark serenity,
I humbly look up to You,
Asking for Your guidance,
To show me what I must do.
Gulls appearing as angels,
Are soaring through the skies,
A congregation of wispy clouds,
Have taken control of my eyes.
Billowing sleeves of purest white,
Seem coming through the haze,
Majestic, gentle, outstretched arms,
At once command my gaze.
Asking for some answers,
You've come with Your embrace,
Through the just born evening,
You've filled me with Your grace.
The water without a ripple,
Reflects this scene from above,
A most magnificent masterpiece,
Painted wholly with Your love.
And dusk introduces the night,
The crescent moon on center stage,
Gives forth a semblance of light.
Perching on the mossy dock,
Staring out at the mirrored lake,
I reflect on this new battle,
Unsure of which road to take.
In this dark serenity,
I humbly look up to You,
Asking for Your guidance,
To show me what I must do.
Gulls appearing as angels,
Are soaring through the skies,
A congregation of wispy clouds,
Have taken control of my eyes.
Billowing sleeves of purest white,
Seem coming through the haze,
Majestic, gentle, outstretched arms,
At once command my gaze.
Asking for some answers,
You've come with Your embrace,
Through the just born evening,
You've filled me with Your grace.
The water without a ripple,
Reflects this scene from above,
A most magnificent masterpiece,
Painted wholly with Your love.
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After struggling through the day, trying to figure out the ups and downs, when it seems those inner battles just won't stop, I often find the answers in solitude. And so often with the peace of the night, come the answers, in the most glorious ways.
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This poem brings a vivid picture to my mind, as if I were the one there. It also brings a calmness to my heart. Thank you for expressing your heart in words. - Dee |
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awesome - Cris |
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It is a wonderful thing to know that God is speaking to lowly men like you and me. I am task with the wonderful job of speaking into the lives of God's Children, and you are task with speaking into the hearts of servants like me. When I read poems like this, it gives me courage as I borrow some of the descriptive phrases, that you and other poets use to describe God's world. I have looked many times into the heavens, using the calm waters as a looking glass. It is a wonderful thing to get quiet before God in the cool of the evening as it is growing dark. Thank you so much for the message. God's Best to you as you continue to be used with your wonderful gift. Pastor Don Jackson - Pastor Don |
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I really love this site- I too write poetry- to me it is a picture- a song- a feeling that touches you to the core- I love to look at a sunset or dewdrops on spiderwebs and flowers and then let inspiration take over. I thank the friend who shared this site with me. - RoseMarie |
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a beautiful poem well written . Isn't God great ? We plan our steps but He directs them. - Bonnie |
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Hi! Very good. The point and wording is beautiful. The rhythm is also pretty good! I like it. - Joy |
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Very beautiful:) - Diane |
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i really love it it was great and you did awsome and it just displays gods love and its so true wow. it touched me. - Aleah |
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I loved this poem. It's really kind of strange, but this weekend I was out photographing a Japanese garden and some of the words I used to describe my photos are the same words you used in your poem. It's very touching and it places me back at that peaceful garden. - Norma |
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I have not been blessed to write poetry but I do love to read it. You have done an excellent job to capture the heart. Do you write poetry for youth? I need some of this kind for my grandsons. thanks - joyce |
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I think that the artist done a good job because there is nothing like the love of god - Tiffany |
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This is the best poem i have ever read! It Has a very deep meaning. It tells me how God Is always there - Nicole |
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beautiful - Teinah |
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wonderful it made me picture every thinh you were describing awsome! - Amy |
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tHE GLORY TO GOD DIS POEM TOUCHD ME IN A SPECIAL WAY AN DI HOPE GOD KEEPS USING YOU TO WRITE POEMS LIKE DIS. GOD BLESS! - CHRISTINA |
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I think that poem is a picture of the friendship between god and you. Lovely! - Rebekah |
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You've painted a wonderful scene. Such peace comes from God. There's just no other peace like it. This brings serenity. Well done. :o) - WhtDove |
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WOW! what a wonderful God. i was moved by this poem - Tina |
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beautiful poem. i love the picture that i see as i read it and message really got to me. - Jessica |
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I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM BECAUSE I REALLY DO BELIVE THAT THE LORD WILL BE COMING BACK FOR HIS CHILDEN - ben |
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beautiful - Ron |
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i think that it was a great poem for people who are just discovering jesus. it is a well written poem! - tiffany |
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Good poetry - Ann |
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I really enjoyed this poem. It paints a serenly beautiful picture and puts into words experiences I've had at our cottage by the lake. - Ellie |
