Do You Even Care? by Kristin Evans
I just don't know how to feel,
If I should just give up,
Store away all emotion
And chalk it up as never meant to be.
I put away what I feel
And try to forget you.
But then you smile at me,
Or brush against me,
And I fall in love all over again.
Then you'll forget me
For awhile, pretend I'm not there.
I cry and wonder,
Do you even care at all?
If I should just give up,
Store away all emotion
And chalk it up as never meant to be.
I put away what I feel
And try to forget you.
But then you smile at me,
Or brush against me,
And I fall in love all over again.
Then you'll forget me
For awhile, pretend I'm not there.
I cry and wonder,
Do you even care at all?
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I wrote this poem while I experienced the pain of falling in love with a best friend who didn't love me the same way. Our friendship has suffered because of this, and I felt this poem expressed the emotions of my soul.
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I love ur poem! I hate boys who make a gurl think they like them and really don't. Thats why it's best to let a boy talk to you first and make him wait b4 yall start dating, 2 see do he really like you if he wait. - Staci |
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Thanx 4 giving me the oppurtunity to read this poem. I LOVE IT. It put how i am feeling on paper. Recently my best friend who i wished was my lover has recently got a girlfriend. Im finding it hard to cope as i wanted him and now his not mine and has no time to spend with me as his always with his gf. Thanx again - Hannah |
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i can relate to this poem my b/f of 2 years broke up with because he said he was not inlove anymore and we worked together so i saw him everyday and he would always smile at me or brush against me then he would ignore me like i was not even there. - vicky |
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your poems are really deep which is really cool alot of people don't want to show there true emotions - haley |
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my comment is that you should wait until you meet the someone that makes you happy the person that make your heart sang and make the move on them and i promise you will be happy and proud with your self im only a14 year old but im a 14 year old with great advice - valerie |
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short,sweet,sad - jc |
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Very good I know that feeling all too well! - Megan |
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i know whats its like to have that feeling i have it to and im 13 guys are so stupid lol and it so hard when you like him and in the back of myhead i know he doesnt well i readlly like this peoms! - jackie |
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iam going thru this right now i love someone who dosent love me back but wont let me be. - heather |
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I love this poem. I felt like crying when i read it. - Kristin |
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I loved this poem because my boyfriend and I had just broken up, and this poem explained exactly how I feel. Thank you - CaSeY |
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I helped my friend to patch up with her boyfriend, and in the process I found myself falling in love with her. And now, they are planning to get married. - martin |
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This is exactly what I am feeling tword ADZ. - Scarlett |
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your poem is awesom....that is hapening to me right now and I know how it feels - Ray |
