Death Not Being The Way by Angell
I held the knife so close to my heart.
Like a foolish child I sat and I cried,
Didn't realize what I had done, what I had tried.
Tears mixed with blood, falling slowly to the ground.
Covered in blood, pulled myself up, in tears scribed:
"To those who don't care, to those who can't see,
Never Give up always thrive to be free."
Didn't know how many people would later cry.
"Tried to be free, yet I see this isn't the way."
Friend at the door, ran as fast as she could.
Too weak to say I'm sorry, otherwise I would.
In tears, looked at the blue sad day.
When you come and see this pool of blood and me,
This isn't the way my life was meant to be.
Like a foolish child I sat and I cried,
Didn't realize what I had done, what I had tried.
Tears mixed with blood, falling slowly to the ground.
Covered in blood, pulled myself up, in tears scribed:
"To those who don't care, to those who can't see,
Never Give up always thrive to be free."
Didn't know how many people would later cry.
"Tried to be free, yet I see this isn't the way."
Friend at the door, ran as fast as she could.
Too weak to say I'm sorry, otherwise I would.
In tears, looked at the blue sad day.
When you come and see this pool of blood and me,
This isn't the way my life was meant to be.
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Rating: A |
This was a longer poem. When I was very depressed I used to think about death every day which was scary. Now I'm not in that state anymore, although still somewhat in depression. I learned to cope, but some people haven't been so lucky as to change their mind about suicide.
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this was a real heart tuchin poem love ya always your bestie xx - katheryn |
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my friend is very suicidal so i read this poem to her and it did help her - Lindsey |
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this poem realy got into me coz not only im a lover poem girl but also i was thinking of killing myself for freedom and happyness as i wrote this poem its like whot i would do or done?? it really got me thinking about it and now i know whot i should do. as 2 the writer bless from me take care love angel_with_sin - angel |
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I Loved it! - Melissa |
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i thought your poem was great,but i think you shouldn't think about suicide so much or of depression i think it's not worth it i had a friend who thought the same way and ended up committing suicide at the age of 17 my advice is to really think about it. - jazzy |
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this poem is the same way i feel. i have tried to commite scuidcid by trying to stab myself from my chin up and alot of different ways too. 1 out of ten this poem is a 20 - travis |
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I give it a 10. Very deep and sad. - David |
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your poem made me a little bit upset, i've been down that road, i took an overdose! I could of died but they managed to save me, i was 13 at the time and im still 13 i done it about 2 months ago, i still feel as if i want to die sometimes, but im a bit more happier with my life, i've got a boyfriend and im in love. Im not goin to give up that, and im not goin to give up my life, when i was in hospital i thought to my self: why did i do this? look what i've done, i've got my whole life ahead of me! anyway, your poem touched me and i thank you for making me realize that it isnt a cool thing 2 do xxxxxlauraxxxxx - laura |
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i really liked this poem because that is the same thing that i tried to do with my life, but i suddenly noticed that this was not an answer it was only an escape with fear. - smiley |
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nice. - alex |
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i've done the same thing and thank you for sharing it with the world, i do fill free thank you for everything! - Paige |
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real deep,, i could feel ur pain. jus real awsome - connie |
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I really like this poem. it makes me feel like someone knows what i am going through. - Megan |
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i love this poem this reminds me of me - james |
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Loved it. Hope to see much,much more. Just remember whats done is done sometimes you can make up for it,sometimes you can't. You can never be to sure so don't attempt. Suicide is never the answer. Before they attempt I hope every one will see that it's not all it's craked up to be. - Taylor |
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Oh my god. I just read through a bunch of poems. This one was so much different from the others. I felt a huge pwoer go trhough me when I finished. Putting your life to an end and then finding out it wasn't meant to be like that. This is a terrific poem. Thank you - Jake |
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This poem is Awsum it is exactly wat my life is like right now i just wish i had sumone that would listen to my cry for help - Sadie |
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This poem sounds just like me then I found the way I loved it! - Angel |
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So clear, so good. im sorry if u ever had to go through this stage but its amazing. your an artist. - Liz |
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This is such a good poem. It really touched me. If it's true, I hope you'll be okay! - Amber |
