Feelings by Austine'a Burrell
The feelings I feel inside
I can't explain
It's like I still love you
but it don't feel the same.
The memories we had
stays on my mind
How can I forget
I think about them all the time.
I wish we could go back
to how we was before
But it feels like the love we had before
just isn't there anymore.
So many thoughts run through my head
like what kind of future we have ahead
I hope all our problems go away
so we can live happier together forever, everyday
And if by chance our love do end
I hope to God that we can still be friends.
I can't explain
It's like I still love you
but it don't feel the same.
The memories we had
stays on my mind
How can I forget
I think about them all the time.
I wish we could go back
to how we was before
But it feels like the love we had before
just isn't there anymore.
So many thoughts run through my head
like what kind of future we have ahead
I hope all our problems go away
so we can live happier together forever, everyday
And if by chance our love do end
I hope to God that we can still be friends.
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This poem is one of my first. It's basically about how I was feeling when me and my boyfriend was going through bad times. It tells how our relationship just isn't the same after what all happened, happened.
I am 15 and in the 10th grade. I got interested in poetry from reading Maya Angelo. I will admit that most of my poems so far is kind of sorry but by reading some of you guys poetry I have learned some things and got some ideas.
(Austine'a may need to learn more poetic technique, but she could teach us all a thing or two about Truth and insight - Ron)
I am 15 and in the 10th grade. I got interested in poetry from reading Maya Angelo. I will admit that most of my poems so far is kind of sorry but by reading some of you guys poetry I have learned some things and got some ideas.
(Austine'a may need to learn more poetic technique, but she could teach us all a thing or two about Truth and insight - Ron)
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Yo ya poems was hot!I can relate all the way. Cause I'm going through the same thing right now. Hope everything turned out alright with your situation. - Niah |
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This poem touched me because i didnt no what love was and my friend kept telling me that he loved me and i couldn't say it back because i didn't no ehat love was. - Ashley |
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i really like this poem. we have the same experience. GOOD JOB! tc! - pauline |
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its awesome and it reminds me of a past relationship - sasha |
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Thats was very good. that seem like a good break up poem. That was very good I LOVED IT! - ivory |
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Great poem. Very touching! - Jill |
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This is a good poem i really enjoyed reading it. - Amber |
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I really like your poem. I've broken up with my boyfriend and when my mom meet him, my heart telling me that i should go back to him. But, it's too late, when my x doesn't like it anymore, all he wants is just a friend. That makes me feel really sad! Keep up the good work - Edellen Jean |
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I like your poem it actually made me cry and this is how I feel I really felt happy. I would like to be this good at writting poems just as good as you - Fany |
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This poem is grat!i inspire this poet to keep writeing poems! - mandi |
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i really loved ur poem!i was on this web site cause my english teacher wanted me to find a love poem!i am in 6th year!i showed all my class and half of the school!almost every1 loved it i think u are a really good writer!keep it up! - jennifer |
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THAT DESRCIBES MY REALTIONSHIP WITH MY BOYFRIEND RITE NOW. THIS POEM IS VERY GOOD AND IT MENT ALOT TO ME. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK - lisa |
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because it made me had a memory of me and my boy and yeah it touched my heart - julie |
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this really touched alot of people but its a good poem to start off with. i have to say it relates to me alittle, me and my ex brok up and we are still good friends, but its hard caz he go out with my friend and it hurts. - kali |
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wow that was one of my fav one's i reminds me so much of this on and off relationship i had with someone i loved very much but every time it dont seen the same not as good in some way and i just loved it so so so so much - Jannea |
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this poem is so colllll is reli reminds me of how i fell abat my x like we hate eachoda but i wish we were still as close as we were b4 we were a item - sadie |
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great job you COMPLETELY captured my felings-your very talented - Megan |
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Your poem is tur to me,I liked it very much I wish I had the chance to write a poem that made tohers feel the same so by this I give your poem a 10 - Stephanie |
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hi, i luv your peom. this is the way i fell with my ex. - Nickey |
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I think that this poem is one of the best i've read. You can relate to the person writing it. You can accutally feel how the person just might feel. I give it a 10 - Becca |
