Wishes by Ron Carnell
Star light,
Start bright,
First star I've seen tonight.
Wish I may,
Wish I might,
Have the wish I wish tonight.
You.
Start bright,
First star I've seen tonight.
Wish I may,
Wish I might,
Have the wish I wish tonight.
You.
Her name was Jodi. We had dated maybe a dozen times, each followed by a card or flowers, accompanied by an original poem telling her how much I enjoyed our times together. My verses were innocent, maybe even sugary, meant only to show Jodi I could be both thoughtful and romantic.
When she failed to even mention the latest one I sent, I realized she had grown accustomed to them. I was no longer thoughtful or romantic, but only predictable. Time for a change.
This poem works, I think, because it surprises.
When she failed to even mention the latest one I sent, I realized she had grown accustomed to them. I was no longer thoughtful or romantic, but only predictable. Time for a change.
This poem works, I think, because it surprises.
| Very good it worked for me! - Joe | |
| beautiful and touching, reminded me of my first love and how i felt about him - Pippa | |
| This poem is almost an original but really changes it a little bit. and makes you have a happy feeling and think about how much poeple love you. - Stephanie | |
| I like this rhyme. short and sweet. It works too! - Danni | |
| I JUST LOVE THIS POEM!!!!! IT IS JUST SO CUTE!!!!!! - CHEER |
